Whenever someone learns I’ve written a novel, usually the
next question out of their mouth is, “So, what’s your book about?” I have met that question with much
trepidation and fear. Don’t get me
wrong—I’m delighted that potential readers want to hear more, but I find it so
hard to sum up “what it’s about” in the course of a casual exchange.
And that is exactly what we are asked to do as writers—to
provide a one-sentence synopsis of the story, to boil down all the themes into
a tag line or a pitch. So, I go
for the obvious and throw out a few bare bones facts concerning the plot:
“There’s this girl who wants to qualify for a prestigious, big horse show
against incredible odds.” With
this, the literary agents, small publishers and maybe even a few readers stifle
a yawn and think, “Girl and her horse story. It’s been done to death.”
We might all have faced that dilemma—striving for a fresh
way to tell an old tale. Seeing
that I’m losing them, I quickly add, “But this girl’s horse may have at one
time been a world class show horse that ends up in a cheap auction’s kill
pen.” Perhaps a few readers prick
up their ears with some interest.
“But more than that. It’s
really about the girl facing her own limitations, her fears, her
insecurities.” I see some lights
come on in my listeners’ eyes, which encourages me to press on. “You see, it’s really about the nature
of desire. How what you want in
life can either twist you up and make you miserable, or liberate you and fill
the void in your life.” The thing
is, the book is about many more things: family dynamics and how wounds
perpetuate themselves, its about fear of failure, its about finding one’s
calling, it’s about how to let go without giving up.
Now, how do I get that all into one catchy line?
Hi LIsa - Welcome to the blog, and thanks for sharing your book with us. I agree - it is so hard to explain what your book is about in a catchy, pithy sentence intended to grab the reader, but not sound trite. I struggle with it constantly!
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